[color=darkblue]Well, here is my attempt at poetry. Please tell me if you like it or not, be [b]brutal[/b] it will help me get better at the parts I suck at.
Here we go...[/color]
[size=22][color=red]I Am[/size][/color]
I am not perfection
Don't look for a saint in me
I live my life boundless
Fun and fancy free
I am not a winner
Don't make me be the best
I am much more content
To live among the rest
All these labels and markers
Telling us who we are
Just downgrade and divide us
Without them, we could go far
I am not perfection
Don't look for a saint in me
I am not a winner
Don't make me be the best
I am free
But I [b]am[/b] a little different from the rest
Because I am [b][i][u]ME[/u][/i][/b]
And that's all you're going to get!!
I Am - Loveless_One
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Get your mind out of the gutter! It's interfering with my snorkel!
But... without the gutter, my mind has no home! I don't want my mind to be homeless!!
"This is my timey-wimey detector; it goes 'ding' when there's stuff."
But... without the gutter, my mind has no home! I don't want my mind to be homeless!!
"This is my timey-wimey detector; it goes 'ding' when there's stuff."
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I Am
I'm glad you guys like it and I fixed the beat problem, Effu-kun, thanks for pointing that out!
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Luvs you all!
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Luvs you all!
Get your mind out of the gutter! It's interfering with my snorkel!
But... without the gutter, my mind has no home! I don't want my mind to be homeless!!
"This is my timey-wimey detector; it goes 'ding' when there's stuff."
But... without the gutter, my mind has no home! I don't want my mind to be homeless!!
"This is my timey-wimey detector; it goes 'ding' when there's stuff."
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It's really nice, it has a musical ring to it.
I think it could be a song rather than a poem, they seem like lyrics to me to a kinda pukish/ rockish sounding song!
Maybe you should search some people who can play the guitar :megane:
You might have a hit!
I think it could be a song rather than a poem, they seem like lyrics to me to a kinda pukish/ rockish sounding song!
Maybe you should search some people who can play the guitar :megane:
You might have a hit!
pru: "No I'm not a virgin!"
FR: "Ah~ then you don't mind this?"
Pru: "No Don't touch me like that it'll hurt!"
Fr: "I thought you weren't a virgin anymore?"
Pru: "Don't put it like that I'm just...pure, like a little bird!"
FR: "Ah~ then you don't mind this?"
Pru: "No Don't touch me like that it'll hurt!"
Fr: "I thought you weren't a virgin anymore?"
Pru: "Don't put it like that I'm just...pure, like a little bird!"