Krew pocalunki Drip :by Keo:

[Keo]

[color=red]Krew pocałunki Drip[/color]

the piano plays in the distance
the sun raises slowly
the birds chirp their love to the other
the clouds float about
the red falls...

...I know what it is
the red isn't paint, beloved

the piano's remedy on my pain fades
the sun hides behind the trees
the birds jolt away, feathers falling from their fear
the clouds go to a depressing color
the red doesn't stop...

...I know why
the red still isn't what you're guessing, dear

falling behind and not looking ahead
why bother with such useless shit?

darkness is enough to make a smile cross my face
the cold brush of death
it's exciting to say the least
blood kisses drip...

[i]...drip...[/i]

...blood kisses drip blood
that's what the red is, love

why do you run?
why do you scream?
why do you shake in fear?

was I not good enough for you?
was I that strange?

am I not who you thought I was?
am I not who you wanted?
am I not sane?

or...

...was I just meant to be insane?

the piano's remedy on my pain fades
the sun hides behind the trees
the birds jolt away, feathers falling from their fear
the clouds go to a depressing color
the red doesn't stop...

salt falls into open wounds

walk away, I want you to leave
go away so I can sleep without thinking about you
so I can be...

[i]...free[/i]

laying on a bed I stare up
I don't blink
I don't move
I don't cry

the red bubbles up and spills over

I move just once
I close my eyes

and wish to never see you again
to never remember kissing you
saying I loved you

...since you left...
...fled and cried...
...I don't miss you
if I do I'll pull the trigger even in the afterlife

I want you to leave me alone
stop haunting me

[i].........drip, drip, dri-[/i]

the piano plays in the distance
the sun raises slowly
the birds chirp their love to the other
the clouds float about
the red falls...

...I know what it is
the red isn't paint, beloved
and I'm not going to stop it...

[Danni_Auttumns]

You're really good at writing dark poetry

It's depressing, and therefore I love it

[Effu-Kun]

[color=red][b]Wow, this was fantastically written!

As someone who simply cannot seem to grasp the workings of poetry that doesn't rhyme, generally speaking I have no appreciation for this type of poetry (not because it's bad, just because I don't understand the dynamics) but the sheer range of feeling and [i]depth[/i] that this one brings with it suckered me in, and to make me enjoy something I normally hate, you have a lot a lot of tallent.

In you is a true poet![/b][/color]

[Keo]

Sorry, Effu :aty: I just can't rhyme things, it's hard for me to do. And when I can is only by pure coincidence. Glad you enjoyed it though.