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they're still smiling... :by Keo:

Post by Keo » 10-10-2010 18:56

when you're in love
you feel like the happiest person alive
you want to give you significant other everything

when they tell you 'yes'
you feel like you're above the heavens
like nothing else could go wrong

this makes your friends happy
oh so very happy
to know you finally got what you were aiming for

but, alas...
...there's always someone

there's that one person
who decided to take the hard road
they cannot touch who they're with
cannot physically touch
cannot kiss
nothing...

and yet they're still smiling
just for you
because you have something they can't have

a physical connection

you never notice
'cause you're as high as the clouds
singing with the angels

and yet that one person still smiles
'cause they're pushing aside the envy
just to let you know how great it is
to have that someone you love
The Sky and Rain... JeremyXZig
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"You have your orders, soldier." (Alex's theme)

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Post by Yuria-chan » 11-10-2010 22:33

I don't always know if it's the author speaking in poems but if it is I want to give you strength to keep this up...
You're not the only one, I've met many people who loved someone who was unreachably far away, still they remained faithfull and loving.
I think it's wonerfull, it's prove that love, will just be love no matter who it is or where that other person is.
Even if that other person is in another world you could still be in love and be happy...
I'm one of those blessed ones who can be with their loved one while alive, It really is bliss.
If you just wait long enough you'll experience that bliss too, because the distance will disapear eventually, even if you meet in anither live as long as you don't forget you can love and wait.
pru: "No I'm not a virgin!"
FR: "Ah~ then you don't mind this?"
Pru: "No Don't touch me like that it'll hurt!"
Fr: "I thought you weren't a virgin anymore?"
Pru: "Don't put it like that I'm just...pure, like a little bird!"

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Post by Keo » 16-10-2010 04:11

This is both from experience of not having the one I love near and for others who are in the same boat.
I thank you for saying such kind things, I'm clinging to that hope that I'll see the person I like soon :blush:

But, for you, I'll wish you the best of luck with your love-life.
The Sky and Rain... JeremyXZig
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