Choking on Air :by Keo:

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Choking on Air :by Keo:

Post by Keo » 16-10-2010 04:15

I feel ill
like I'm choking on air
blood slowly flowing
gagging as I swallow

my hands clasp yours
you're crying
trembling fingers
why do you cry over only [b]me[/b]?
digging my nails into your flesh
watching you with a confused look

it's cold
yet contact so warm
I shiver violently
you lean in to be beside me
even as I lay here
you then whisper sweet-sweet words
as my eyes close
and pray to see you again
The Sky and Rain... JeremyXZig
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Post by Yuria-chan » 06-11-2010 19:47

I like poems like these, they are like small narrations. Not prose but not poem either. All you actually need is accompaniing music and pictures and then read it out...That would be extremelly sad tough :escape:
I think I'd cry over a video like that
pru: "No I'm not a virgin!"
FR: "Ah~ then you don't mind this?"
Pru: "No Don't touch me like that it'll hurt!"
Fr: "I thought you weren't a virgin anymore?"
Pru: "Don't put it like that I'm just...pure, like a little bird!"

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Post by Sesshy'sGirlLOL01 » 16-12-2010 00:58

I agree with Yuria-chan, if i saw a video of this I'd probably cry.

Good work! =D
Everything makes sense when your insane...

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